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[Itachi's Story]

Refining

Your story telling skills visually needs polishing. Drama/ beef is clearly there between characters but you need to give these scenes a more stunning presence and impact on the storyline.
There are many techniques to accentuate emotion and action. Shaking your animation when someone is hit, assigning text style consistency between character personalities, showing vulnerbility in your characters in storyline and well cropped cut scenes are a few things that may have enhance your flashes impact upon us.
Flash backs for some background info on Itachi and Kisame could have given us some insight into who these 2 characters are and also generalise the audience for your flash.
There is room for improvement here and surely it will be evident in your next flash.

[Whisker Sack Knife]

Lacking

The animation needs more assertion visually in order to bring out its punch line.
Perhaps holding the image longer before going in for another loop would create a larger impact. Also making the knife fall faster would have helped.

Your efforts to deliver the 'WSK' joke are good, largely due to the sound and 3 word 'BAM' style text intro (which also needs a bit of polishing).

Bill-Hundle responds:

Thanks for the review. I will work a lot harder on my next animation.

[Quicksand school project]

Nice

Fantastic Concept. Visually this needs polishing to bring out concepts full potential.

[Early missle test movie]

You've got potential

Your choreography in terms of different action shots, timing and events are great. The visuals are questionable, although effective. The last shot of the character kicking the missile seems inconsistent with the rest of the flash's visual style. A soundtrack would work well with your animation style.

Nice double boost from the rocket too.

[Walk in the Woods]

Wonderful Style

I am quite amused

[Tri-Optum]

Confused

I was clueless as to what was happening from start to end. Although nice use of line thickness

[Marshmellow Tapdance]

Not bad

If you paced the slip of the marshmellow faster and given us the surprise element it would have made me lol.

[Hi, How are You ?]

Decent

Not bad for a first flash in terms of audio selection, pacing and visual substance. Quite random too.

[CHRIS & The Manatee!]

Effort

More time and detail put into the background would have gave this flash a much higher impact, including its humour.

[A Tricky Seeing Eye]

lol

how long it take u to do this?

Frank2982 responds:

Well, it was 5 years in the making since I made it back in 2003. But honestly, probably like 5 minutes. I don't remember though. I made it back in 2003.