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[[SF] Stick Fight #2]

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That was it? I suggest a more suitable and dynamic visual presence to be coupled with such great music.

SubmitFlash responds:

yah.. this is not my best work.

[LL - Looking Evil.]

wow

I'l say that for 6.2 MB was not worth it. Perhaps you might like to reduce audio file sizes. Besides that, the animation was very smooth in terms of the transition into the 'lock' looking evil.
The music coupled here is very effective and well picked; although for such a static single frame, there are moments where the audio and image did not quite fit. The numerous highs and lows in the audio called for a more dynamic animation-audio relationship.
Your animation skills here are without a doubt very pleasureble to watch although there just wasnt enough of it. Im looking forward to something more spectacular in your next entry and hope youll blow us away with it.

Madanimation responds:

Thanks a bunch for the review.
I do tend to put my skills into something big and I too hope to blow you all away with it.
Thanks again for the review :3
--WineLock

[AWRD v2]

Interesting

Your audio background loop was very nice, although it needed to connect properly. Your animation style is very smooth and consistent with the audio although visually the detail was lacking.
Backgrounds need refining and perhaps a more fruitful insight into different cultures would have been more of a pleasure to watch. After all that build up of respect and admiration for all these cultures explored you can then successfully bring in the punch line with the traveller getting blown away by the NG tank.
This needs much polishing in order to bring out the full potential of this flash. I hope your next entry will be something visually spectacular and simply blow us away.

JKE responds:

Thank You! I'll try next time!

[Midday in Rand0mverse]

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This is just like the story of the Grasshopper and the Octopus. All year long the grasshopper would bury acorns for winter, while the octopus mooched off his girlfiend and watch T.V. Then the winter came, and the grasshopper died and the octopus ate all his acorns, and also got a racecar!. . . Is any of this getting through to you?

Haihaine responds:

Yes. It makes perfect sense. Just like my flash, although not as deep and world altering.

[Whisker Sack Knife]

Lacking

The animation needs more assertion visually in order to bring out its punch line.
Perhaps holding the image longer before going in for another loop would create a larger impact. Also making the knife fall faster would have helped.

Your efforts to deliver the 'WSK' joke are good, largely due to the sound and 3 word 'BAM' style text intro (which also needs a bit of polishing).

Bill-Hundle responds:

Thanks for the review. I will work a lot harder on my next animation.

[A Tricky Seeing Eye]

lol

how long it take u to do this?

Frank2982 responds:

Well, it was 5 years in the making since I made it back in 2003. But honestly, probably like 5 minutes. I don't remember though. I made it back in 2003.

[Zomborg Apocalypse - 006]

aight

very nice graphics but its shit anyway. action isnt in detail. shud be more action in dere. story line is great so far. great sound too. all sequels r shit anyway. hoping to see next wun. dats an 8 m8

SPLANKGY responds:

thanks

[FF:WotN Vol1]

not so good

the idea of all dat technical jargon thru out the flash is pritti kool. i like dat style of dat attck dmg n xp n shit and dat deserved a 10. the rest suked. good thing ur next episodes r more action based, and plz include more diff weopons. we viewers luv more diff unque crazy kool awesome weopons. i understand ur first episode sux, hope to see better improvement.

LeetReeb responds:

thanks, the this isn't planning on being a 2 parter, i'm talking about ongoing, it will only get better though :)

[Theif VS Fighter 2 Plus2]

WDF

man wat the hells with the old school graphics? dey r really dodgy and the action juss turned me off... dahs a 0 m8

m0hawk responds:

Well, I gotta say. The action wasn't exactly designed to make your horny.. mate.